Friday, October 17, 2008

Confusion Answered

I didn't tear down the walls,
though I know to you it must seem that way.
They were brought down by an outside force
and it broke my heart
to not be able to tell you why or how.
I didn't abandon you
even if it felt that way.
The theatre is not empty,
your words do not go unheard,
I swear.
Searching for the opportune moment
to breach the silence
offer up explanations.
And here
we
go...

4 comments:

Jannie Funster said...

This moves so well into a mist of mystery at the end.

Why could you not tell him or her?

planned confusion said...

this is wonderful!
do you have dark side of the moon pj pants? cuz if so, can i borrow them for the jr. high's pj day on monday?
lol, just wondering.
cya Sunday!
<33

hybjbmap

planned confusion said...

thank you thank you thank you!
bring them sunday ;]

oh! i agree!! except for tyler, i didnt want his clothes anymore, so i gave them to his next girlfriend, actually i gave her everything he ever gave me. it was quite funny ;)
but, i'll keep that in mind. teehee
<3!
mumow...or is it mvmow
i guess it was a v cuz they gave me a new one jcjopvqt

? said...

Hi,

Reads like a breath of fresh air. I guess our confusion could be described in that way. Reading this makes me wonder whether life isn't just a series of interacting particles considering we think we now know much about the universe. I love your verse, amazing. Also, thanks for stopping by and staying connected.

Ill be back soon...for more