Saturday, November 29, 2008

Shambling

two piercing eyes
glanced into two piercing eyes
and energies met head-on
we tiptoe around
like heartbreaking new friends.
tiptoe-ing in that phophorescent void.
heartbreaking.
my nutty surrealist low-voiced serious staring talk
and your critical anti-everything drawl
leaning together, hands waving wildly,
conversing excitedly,
when beings like this collide,
we are attacked with the great amorous soul
we have just created
like a huge benzedrine hallucination.
it all sounds so much more poetic in words,
it all felt so much more poetic in emotions,
in looks, in such an unreal reality.

3 comments:

planned confusion said...

it worked it worked!
this is wonderful!
<3
comoniz
ps. you'll love my outfit for church

planned confusion said...

ill call you, when i find out if i can do anything(;

<3
phityroy
...say that 10 times fast

Эндий said...

overdose of reality.
if oedipus has a brother, does he suffer from similar symptoms?

have i mentioned yet how this post glides beautifully? i havent? i have.

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